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  • Gaps between content bubbles could be smaller, so the result would look more compact.

  • The position of text inside content bubble are not consistent, some are closer to the upper margin of the bubble while some are closer downwards.

  • ​Images are not aligned, could atleast be aligned at the bottom and different at the top.

  • Some of the introductory title like in Poetry are too short.

  • Jargons in the definitions of poems, hard to understand how poetry forms like villanelle or sonnet work without knowing the basic definition of words.

mom

  • The Haiku poem image got slightly cut off at the top, removing a part of the japanese Kanji.

  • The image for the Sestina is not that related. It's cool to know a band toke the same name as a famous poem, but is it really useful to reader?

  • Overall, the poetry article looks rushed, maybe tidy up the format.

  • ​Following up with mom's comment on introductory title, the course outline introductory title is too long.

  • I love the new "go back/next article" buttons, but it have a different position in every article; sometimes closer to the bottom margin while sometimes higher.

dad

  • Text bubble colour can be lighter

  • Poets unit can be more tailored to Palmer

  • Same as poems

Dora Wang

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