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Ethan Choi
Palmer
Block B
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Gaps between content bubbles could be smaller, so the result would look more compact.
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The position of text inside content bubble are not consistent, some are closer to the upper margin of the bubble while some are closer downwards.
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​Images are not aligned, could atleast be aligned at the bottom and different at the top.
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Some of the introductory title like in Poetry are too short.
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Jargons in the definitions of poems, hard to understand how poetry forms like villanelle or sonnet work without knowing the basic definition of words.
mom
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The Haiku poem image got slightly cut off at the top, removing a part of the japanese Kanji.
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The image for the Sestina is not that related. It's cool to know a band toke the same name as a famous poem, but is it really useful to reader?
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Overall, the poetry article looks rushed, maybe tidy up the format.
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​Following up with mom's comment on introductory title, the course outline introductory title is too long.
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I love the new "go back/next article" buttons, but it have a different position in every article; sometimes closer to the bottom margin while sometimes higher.
dad
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Text bubble colour can be lighter
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Poets unit can be more tailored to Palmer
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Same as poems
Dora Wang


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